The number of people working online from home is growing in some countries What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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The number of people working online from home is growing in some countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The trend of working from home has increased recently in several countries over the world. However, naturally it has pros and cons particularly for workers’ own, organization and society.
Advantages wise, online jobs help worker having flexible schedule to adjust activities possible. If they have to work at officer, it is complusory to come to company and finish work on time. However, when they has ability to do at home, it is optional to finish the tasks whenever having square time. By the way, people would sleep in later than working offline. Especially, during the serious epidemic situation, growing the number of persons working online contributes to keep some cases at stable level for the safety of society. For example, when working directly at company, people have to work during office hours and can not arbitrarily do habits. But as work from home, it is easy to get up late, watch movie, hang out and do the assigments anytime as long as jobs are completed.
For the opposite side, although workers can fix their jobs flexibly, the efficiency is not as good as in the office. Because they can image that it has ability to be distracted by surrounding environment. In particular, their family members forget that they are working at home and indeliberately make noise and make them lose attention to jobs. In addtion, it would raise the risk of health problems from the laziness and unsual life styles. For instance, they can be lazier than normal and wake up late that leads to starve themselves. Moreover, their works can be slowly completed.
To conclude, increasing the number people working at home has both advantages and disadvantages but it is the optimal that it depends on the individuals to choose what type of jobs and their consciousness to insure all the drawbacks are on the lowest rate.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...finish work on time. However, when they has ability to do at home, it is optional t...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ciency is not as good as in the office. Because they can image that it has ability to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in particular, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94480519481 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67592352395 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555194805195 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.586612884 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295962567389 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860375089957 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803800435006 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177280804938 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740867041633 0.056905535591 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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