ocial media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
The increasing number of users in social media nowadays is the most popular at any age group worldwide. Sharing personal information to the public invades privacy. In my perspective, people using social media have more positive side than its flaws, which I will tackle in this essay.
Social Media such as Facebook, Instagram and Tweeter are the highest percentage of users. Additionally, applications offered different features and platforms allow users to quickly create and share content to the public. To begin its positive side, firstly, it increased self confidence by empowering introverts to express their ideas and feelings by posting message, photos and event in their life. Secondly, it helps to stay connected with friends and family and meet new acquaintances that can find across the globe with same interest. Next, it will gain vast knowledge and information especially to the students. Moreover, people will become updated on trend worldwide. Lastly, it will have an enormous support for business and marketing industry. Due to wide audience and accessibility, it will attract targeted customers and respond to the queries quickly. For instance, Covid-19 pandemic, some of the people lost their jobs and find way to get income by online selling in social media to survive.
On the contrary, the negative effect of this platform that everyone are facing are people become addicted browsing in the site, consuming more time than doing important task. Another is invading of privacy; users can stalk and monitor other person anytime, data trafficking and spreading user’s personal information. Also, using the internet, face to face and lack of emotional communication lessen.
In conclusion, social media has more benefits for everyone in majority of population. Users should be aware and responsible before sharing information in public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46366782007 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76146247122 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6605111746 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8823529412 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248043053073 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746056368283 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07575465414 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165827159321 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983626966378 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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