Essay topics:
the older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
It is true that fierce competition in the job market between older people and their
younger counterparts has become an increasingly widespread concern. Several
problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number
of effective solutions from both individuals
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Essays by user quangphan4697
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- :Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 61
- Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes. 67
- Some people believe that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city.Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people believe that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city.Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people believe that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city.Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 248.0 1615.20841683 15% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 44.0 315.596192385 14% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.5755095769 4.20363070211 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94263332903 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 42.0 176.041082164 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.954545454545 0.561755894193 170% => OK
syllable_count: 72.9 506.74238477 14% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 8.5 49.4020404114 17% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155126183393 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104108207392 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.011486847586 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730639263832 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279594193453 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 78.4519038076 19% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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