One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, modern medical institutions and health research have brought miracles to the world. Humans have cures for deadly diseases, and researchers are working with our genes to prevent disease even before we’re born - this is truly amazing. As a result, people live longer these days. Some consider this to be an alarming trend, while I firmly believe that longer lifespan provides far more benefits than disadvantages.
Many people believe that increasing life expectancy increases the proportion of the elderly population and reduces the active workforce. Thus, they believe that the support of the older generation is a burden on the country. But this opinion is erroneous and not supported by the facts. With the increase in life expectancy, people today remain more active and contribute to the life of society even in old age. As the government has raised the retirement age, older people are no longer a burden, but an active workforce. To give an example: Professors, researchers, legislators, writers, and many other professionals have a wealth of experience and can contribute to old age. Thus, when a physicist discovers a groundbreaking theory in his 70s, we have to thank expanded medical research and treatment.
Finally, as the number of working parents grows, grandparents are the last resort for young children. Older people are doing us a favor by taking on most of our family concerns.
In conclusion, I want to say that thanks to improved health care, thanks to which we now live longer and are part of the progress.
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- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the disadvantages of this development outweight the disadvantages 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15476190476 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83151307498 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3327722793 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214117482632 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690481086364 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589692870965 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11153204418 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360874874467 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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