One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people live longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Medical development has enabled people to enjoy higher living standards as well as longer life expectancy. However, this does not come without disadvantages. In the school of thought, they are undoubtedly outweighed by the enormous benefits this development has displayed.
Firstly, it should be acknowledged that an increased life expectancy is likely to come with the burdens of the senior population. While it is evident that older people with years of experience are an indispensable part of the labour workforce, they also can stall progress if they refuse to retire and occupy positions meant for their younger counterparts. Moreover, resources devoted to the older population hardly produce any returns for the economy in particular and the society in general. At the same time, it places a burden on the active labour force, especially with an ever-growing number of elders.
On the other hand, the advantages are indisputable. First, experienced employees can still contribute their hard-earned skills and insights without obstructing their younger counterparts, as long as companies adopt policies solely designed for them. For example, several organizations have introduced a so-called “ senior payroll” scheme. People passed the retirement age with relevant expertise can work on their projects and receive bonuses per profit rather than being official full-time employees. In addition, to the individuals, a longer lifespan means more time to enjoy life. After serving the society for years, it is only just that person who finally finishes the “rat race” be granted the right to pursue personal interests. The more time one has after retirement, the more chances he or she earns to lead a more fulfilling life. Therefore, it is natural that virtually everyone strives for longevity.
In conclusion, while the debate might continue on whether increased life expectancy is a bane or a boon, in my opinion, the number of benefits is still dominating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45276872964 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96126141498 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1994148694 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166983445548 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054418031399 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653942471477 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116139431522 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847154541219 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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