For one upon ago,
For one upon ago, Vietnam's economy is traditional manufacturing. High levy tax was focused on personal tax social exclusion only. After it collapsed and was replaced by the model economy, Agriculture was not the backbone of the economy anymore, instead of it is knowledge-based and industry, Industry is thriving and extended opportunities. Increased output impacted significantly the current economic climate, it made the economy uninterrupted growth, and following it public spending was advanced.
However, this fast growth is also causing economic issues, for example, inflation, rampant inflation is increasing. The question is how to curb inflation. There are a lot of investors who invest for the long term but do have not enough capital, they need to borrow at a high-interest rate, which leads to the black economy or plummeting profit, the enterprise cheating on taxes, and there was a lot of under-declared earnings. Furthermore, those things will impact the economy, make weaken it, goes into recession, and collapses it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16592576311 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71875 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.052377544 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164157821959 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087501258191 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187895737263 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116733810991 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521174778181 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.