Online currencies have become more common in recent years. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development? Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, digital currency is the trend that most people are interested in. Will this development tend to bring positive or negative things? Some people assume that cinema is becoming ineffective due to new streaming services. I totally agree with this opinion and think that the development of online currencies has had a significant impact on people's lives.
First of all, the ease of transactions in various activities has become more secure. In the current era, everyone prefers digital things over manual activities, it is because it is able to facilitate the activities carried out. Moreover, the same thing with the use of online currency, everyone thinks that using digital money speeds up the transaction process both in payments and other transactions. For instance, when an emergency is needed to send money but the distance between the house and the bank is far, it makes the transaction slow but the presence of online money makes transactions easier just by using the internet. That's why, digital money is very important for our life to encourages our daily activity.
Secondly, Things in the cinema are becoming more conducive through online money services. In other words, everyone likes the service of online money in the community, even though there are occasional errors, it still guarantees the effectiveness of this service. In addition, the presence of online money in ticket purchase transactions in cinemas causes the situation to be more orderly because people do not need to buy tickets directly. For example, when the latest movie comes out, there will be many enthusiasts who want to watch the film but sometimes the crowd of enthusiasts makes people lazy to buy tickets at the cinema because of the queue, but now through online money they can buy tickets online and pay online. Thus, when in some case we got a diffuclty for buy a ticket we can search a shedule of what movie show on bioskop and paid it by online.
To conclude, digital money have a crucial role for every person life, through this way all activities become easy and simple for do something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'are'?
Suggestion: are
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99713467049 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63373507688 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550143266476 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5313549503 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230149396039 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898731243477 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072413997723 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159946398945 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109870767741 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.