The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, when traffic becomes be an important issue in human’s life, safety is always considered as a promoted priority, especially road safety which is the most popular way. Some people say that giving much stricter punishments on driving offenses is the only way to improve road safety. However, in my point of view, there are many different measures to restrain negative problems.
Firstly, stricter punishments can be effective that makes drivers be careful while involving in roads. As we both know, motoring offence is crime. It also means dangers are near by anyone. In this case, proposing tough policies about both non-custodial sentence and prison sentence is necessary. In fact, many countries in the world implemented the confiscation of the driving licenses to people not adhering to the traffic law. In the UK, people can take a prison sentence for several years because of endangering innocent lives… These policies are absolutely succeeded in a certain aspect.
On the other hand, we can use other measures that seem to be lighter and more incentive. The first way might be installing speed cameras to remind drivers not to commit any mistake or break the rules. Recently, the way is applied in many areas and already brings positive results as a decreasing of the number of people going beyond standard speed. Moreover, the police should patrol around roads of local by vehicle inspections, which makes sure that they can do something on time as a sudden accident. we can easily see the result of the method in any high way, by patrolling regularly, the police can give a favor to vehicle unluckily have the breakdown.
In conclusion, there is not only way that brings stricter punishments to change road safety. we should flexibly use proper traffic measures on driving offenses to get the best results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12913907285 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67577739331 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7753445343 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211334405073 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665552995255 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101076556101 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142005454529 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860709325252 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.