In order for the world to be a 'greener' place, punishments and fines for environmentally unfriendly acts committed by individuals need to be more severe.
Through everyday activities, people emit a large amount of waste to environment which damages it frequently. Some people say authorities should ban that action by create new laws to fine them. Others claim that government shouldn't use regulations to help the environment. From my point of view, strict punishment from government is needed to avoid the environmental damaging.
To some extent, many new factories have been built due t the development of industry. However, the crucial matter is these manufacturers aren't satisfying the regulations about dealing with waste after production. For example, factories' chemicals waste come from one processing need to be treated carefully before send it out environment. Nevertheless, they throw it out to environment with out any treatment due to saving much time and money but the nature are damaged a lot such as polluted air makes people hard to breath, polluted river make many aqueous creatures die, etc.. These matter may be contributing to the wealth of people by making the resources become more valuable but without complying the regulations, people are day by day destroying our planet.
Additionally, not just come from industrial activities, daily tasks also cause contaminations. One of that is individuals' vehicle which put out a tons of harmful air to environment such as CO2, NO, etc. so that makes the greenhouse effect such as melting ice, desertification even worse. Electric car and public transports will decrease the amount of greenhouse gases to zero will slow down the greenhouse effect. Moreover, trash litter in developing country still a big problems to authorities although some slogans are send to citizens, but it still needs the law to fine individuals who are littering.
In conclusion, punishment and fine are crucial things to save the environment, which is really polluted now
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
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Message: Two consecutive dots
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ton' or simply 'tons'?
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30508474576 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02760259574 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.167539967 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140905678485 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424849569504 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537591962804 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084288609411 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022743018231 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.