Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss
Environment is the most searching word on the Internet by people all around the world. There are many natural happen recently such as fire-forest at Australia, hurricane at Japan and more. Some people claim that the government should take care the environment which is harmed now. Others say that not only the government but also people have obligation for the environment. From my point of view, authorities and individuals have the same duty to improve the environment.
Firstly, every people need to conserve the environmental matters if they want the better habitat because environment is the problem affect every people. For instance, litter, waste water, deforestation and using many individual vehicles. That circumstance create the air pollution, destroy the scenery, flood and fire-forest now easier to come. For helping the environment, people have done several tasks like planting, collect the trash, treat the waste water and using public transport or cycling. Secondly, people need to educate their children about protecting the environment for better life quality. Although each people cannot affect the whole picture of environment however, if people together preserve the environment, they will archive the better scenery, air, life habitat, etc.
On the other hand, politics play the important role to keep the environment clean and healthy. There many works that authorities have done. For example, move the factory to the suburban in order to make the city center, where many people live in, stay clear from toxic chemicals, fumes and industrial risks like fire and explode. Moreover, public transport need to be built more and develop more vehicles that use green energy. Last but not least, educate people how important of the environmental protection by consequences of using public transport, depose garbage at prescribed places, not using plastic bags, planting trees and using non-chemicals compose.
In conclusion, the environment is a big subject that both authorities and citizens need to simultaneously take care of. Regulars and awareness is the essential aspect for keeping environment safe and clean.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
... individual vehicles. That circumstance create the air pollution, destroy the scenery,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48181818182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80033449399 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2474677008 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233238348191 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730633177084 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973268284621 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148875294734 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102298308486 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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