Over the last centuries, reading, writing and maths are the three recognized traditional subjects. Nowadays, as computer becomes more important, some people believe that every child should be taught computer skills as the fourth subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered to be include computer as a forth subject together with other important subjects like reading, writing, and maths. However, in this essay agree with the statement because, computer technology may applicable to every field, and students needs to be aware about innovative subjects.
Computer skills are inevitable and often recognized by many fields including, educational, employments, services, daily lives and so on. Students who get enough knowledge regarding innovative technology may enhance the future well being. Other primitive subjects like reading , writing, maths may develop cognitive thinks and self esteem. While, recent days, poor ability to computer programs might mitigate changing trends and probably livelihood in some extent. For example, most of the study materials are available in internet, and web for the research and project works of higher education. Students who have less education on computer would adversely affect on their academics.
Likewise, many companies and institutes often recommended people with computer knowledge and able to manage info surfing. Thereby, computer knowledge limit would lead to loss of employments and poverty as a whole. Moreover, students who offer innovative technology basement may enhance the work placements and job security in forthcoming era. Basic knowledge about computer from the student period would adhere deep inside of pupils mind like other traditional subjects. For instance, students who taught computer as a strict subject in USA shows betterment in technical grasping power and ideas than the other students.
To sum up, computer skills is indispensable in modern world like any other precedence subjects. Thereby, every school authority to add computer as a subject in curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71428571429 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77556645839 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1762050142 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226529037938 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778839314606 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479957174998 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153034005707 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259323758852 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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