Nowdays, people can not run very few steps without mobile phone and use of mobile phone has increased among young people. However, smoking was very an inevitable for Banned in public places and in the same way at this time it should be banned in major places. But I firmly agree to the given statement and I say about the both side in the following paragraph.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, first and foremost reason behind this is that smoking is very harmful for our body and more terrible for non smoker. People can become a victim of lung cancer, heart problem and so on. Another statements is electronic gadget which is called a mobile phone. It should be prohibited in serveal area like library, temple, hospital, school, office and so on because it can be distracted in these places. The strong example in this phenomenon, it should be compulsory restigate in library because there are a lot of people do studying and comes incoming call on someone people mobile which can be disconcert on study.
On the contrary, if mobile phone will be close in many places so it can number of trouble on Children such as they can not received emergency calls from home. Beside this, they can not connected with entertainment apps such as, YouTube is the biggest platform for performing a hidden talent, so they can not performing your ability. There are a number of apps which help people have a life is really like camera, email, browser the web, play music and so on.
In final words, my opinion are on par with Idea date mobile phone is indispensable part in our monotonous life but it should use in very limited period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Analysing the statement and explaining further, first and foremost reason behin...
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Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...t problem and so on. Another statements is electronic gadget which is called a mob...
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Line 2, column 614, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...ying and comes incoming call on someone people mobile which can be disconcert on stud...
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Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll on someone people mobile which can be disconcert on study. On the contrary, i...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'receive'
Suggestion: receive
...rouble on Children such as they can not received emergency calls from home. Beside this,...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'connect'
Suggestion: connect
...ls from home. Beside this, they can not connected with entertainment apps such as, YouTub...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'perform'
Suggestion: perform
...orming a hidden talent, so they can not performing your ability. There are a number of app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, such as, on the contrary, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69097222222 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45066827227 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4250850339 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303114302126 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102748237052 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668819326561 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184370832319 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827059685121 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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