Just as every coin has a flip side to equal number of men and women worker brings both a negative as well as positive impact on our life. I think it is our own perspective about something that decides it positive development. I would explain the positive development of equal number of both worker in following paragraph. I believe it is more positive and negative development.
Out of all arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is it is two reasons why some females worker do not accept job into the companies. First and foremost some multinational companies do focus on the good employee which have good skills, efficient viable, efficient knowledge about new development, good qualification and so on, but some skill do not have women. Secondly, some women staying at home to take care of your family and children and it is a training customs for a our country. The strongest example, the Indian Research company do not accepts the women worker because their uses some different type of chemical which is very effected of he women.
On the other hand, I believe many fields have available their women employees are more necessary than male employees, in Some industries compared with males, and females employees actually have a better performance. In cosmetic industry, I think women are more familiar to the some powder, face wash, perfume, etc, and have good market strategies. Another else, some females are teachers are more patience and good knowledgeable, so they are become more needed in the kindergarten than men.
In conclude, give some positive development about women workers, so I think some companies should keep same number of men workers as well as women worker in the companies.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...and women worker brings both a negative as well as positive impact on our life. I think it...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of both worker in following paragraph. I believe it is more positive and negativ...
^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ildren and it is a training customs for a our country. The strongest example, the...
^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'our'?
Suggestion: a; our
...ildren and it is a training customs for a our country. The strongest example, the Ind...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'accept'?
Suggestion: accept
...ple, the Indian Research company do not accepts the women worker because their uses som...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 651, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of the women'?
Suggestion: of the women
...type of chemical which is very effected of he women. On the other hand, I believe many f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter performance. In cosmetic industry, I think women are more familiar to the som...
^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...I think women are more familiar to the some powder, face wash, perfume, etc, and ha...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98606271777 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74520239103 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5840630417 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351153356814 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139556030555 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889792783724 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237294103858 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102530846385 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...and women worker brings both a negative as well as positive impact on our life. I think it...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of both worker in following paragraph. I believe it is more positive and negativ...
^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ildren and it is a training customs for a our country. The strongest example, the...
^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'our'?
Suggestion: a; our
...ildren and it is a training customs for a our country. The strongest example, the Ind...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'accept'?
Suggestion: accept
...ple, the Indian Research company do not accepts the women worker because their uses som...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 651, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of the women'?
Suggestion: of the women
...type of chemical which is very effected of he women. On the other hand, I believe many f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter performance. In cosmetic industry, I think women are more familiar to the som...
^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...I think women are more familiar to the some powder, face wash, perfume, etc, and ha...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98606271777 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74520239103 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5840630417 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351153356814 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139556030555 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889792783724 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237294103858 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102530846385 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.