Parent and children
Nowadays, there is a range of opinion assuming that the distance between the children and their parent appears to be increasing in family. Some reason can be mentioned explaining for that point of view and I will propose some solution to tackle this problem.
The parent and their children seem to be less close in modern society. The main reason can be the parent are constantly under the heavy workload, and they can not put more attention on the other things. A few people employ the domestic worker as a way to sort out their problem, but inadvertently, it can make a harmful impact on the parent- child relationships. Another explanation, the burst of technology era and hi-tech equipment also contributes to a growing divide between children and parent. The absorption of adult in technology, from text to playing video games, limits their availabilities to communicate with their children. Besides, it is difficult for the caregiver to contact with their children if they do not have enough the soft skill and creating an incorrect upbringing.
Some solutions can preclude families from being trapped in this circumstance. Firstly, creating a work-life balance should be put on the top priority of parents. A typical example of it, with an appropriate timetable, adult can adjust their activities more effectively and spending more time involving in talking with children. Secondly, it is necessary for people to cut down the frequency of using high-tech equipment, applying to both parents and children. Lastly, there is an abundance of benefits from the childcare training course for parent, so adults should participate in these classes to broaden their knowledge.
In conclusion, the distance between parent and children grows bigger and bigger as a result of some elements and fortunately, people can undertake a range of ways to cope with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15562913907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87339576598 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7430472445 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358994351476 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14138684007 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113101317883 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238520940475 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668643872061 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.