You recently attended a meeting at the hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In Your letter.
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are also important
Tell the manager what you want him to do
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing a letter with regarding concern to you for the avail of essential document left while I have pertaining a memorable general assemble at your hotel.
However, I am an honorable participant from the Daina Fiver Optical Company limited. Our management body has organized a crucial annual meeting for the time being of business development where I am a distinguished speaker on this conference. I have exhibited my pivotal documents and papers at your hotel room especially in Ball room section. Unfortunately, completing my projector showing I have left my whole documentary on Dias.
I am also reviewing my point and the significant of the documentary; it bears my reputation and company accountability and work advancement as responsibility part of the management.
I would request to you with my core of heart that you would sent my slide show documentary papers by express mail delivery as early as possible. I am commitment to you while you mail my papers I will pay enough money as per service purposes.
I am avail waiting for your feedback.
Kind regards,
Dr. Bariston karker
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
...ou with my core of heart that you would sent my slide show documentary papers by exp...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ess mail delivery as early as possible. I am commitment to you while you mail my ...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... enough money as per service purposes. I am avail waiting for your feedback. Ki...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04324324324 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12946364924 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2278807038 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265837656178 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091902420095 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964630870796 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135190147832 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113964297458 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.