In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
People used to go to their work every day in the past. But after rised use of smart technologies and the internet most people are working from the home.
There are many advantages and disadvantages of this issue. I think it has more advantages. We can do more and more things by using computer, smart phones and the internet.
Firstly, we do not waste our time to take transport to go and come from work. Also have enough time to rest while working. It has a good result, new ideas.
Secondly, you can spend your time with your family and this leads to the fact that family relations are good. In my opinion, it is necessary in globalized world.
Thirdly, working at home decreased your expendeture for transport, dinner and others. As a result, it helps us to solve some economical problems.
On the other hand, working from home has some disadvantages. Firstly, people who works at home using computers do not communicate with others. Consequently, these people do not socialized and communicative.
Secondly, if we work at home, we will remain motionless. It raises some health problems. For example, fatting, decreasion seeing.
In conclusion, there are clearly advantages and disadvantages to working from home. Perhaps, the ideal arrangement would be to spend part of the working week in an office with colleagues and the part of the working week at home with a certain amount of flexibility and comfort
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90416666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7982850651 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.393325642 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.85 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441185293296 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122204713927 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121742033119 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189421459586 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15298409049 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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