In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of foods from all over the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, it is common for people not to buy items that are not produced in their country of origin. Although citizens have tended to eat local food for many years, in my opinion, this trend could have positive and negative outcomes in equal measures.
On the one hand, local foods have better taste and quality. In season, local foods are often fresher and better than foodstuffs from all over the world. Because they do not have to travel long distances which means they spend less time in transit and can be harvested at peak ripeness. Additionally, we care about food hygiene and safety. When purchasing food in shops or markets, it is very easy to know the place of origin and how they are made. For example, people could buy fruits and vegetables washed and packaged in a clean environment. This can protect themselves and their families.
On the other hand, people can access a wider range of foods if they buy them from all over the world. This allows them to try incredibly exciting and exotic foods they may not try otherwise. This is because some foods are not available in their area. For instance, some places on the planet have dishes with unique flavors, so we should give them a shot and learn about different cuisines and food traditions. Furthermore, people also improve their nutrition by buying imported foods. Different regions of the world have different types of foods rich in nutrients, so people can eat it to increase physical enhancement. It is very beneficial for their health for them to mix the local foods with imported foods.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the advantages of buying food in the local area are equal to buying overseas. It is recommended that people consider before buying something.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45087512715 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2193964278 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356958822999 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120102819596 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881970559076 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229074626487 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604814648453 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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