Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undoubtedly that our world is facing a variety of environmental issues such as global warming, greenhouse gases, acid rain, air pollution, deforestation and so on. While I agree that the disappearance of several flora and fauna is a serious problem, I believe other environmental problems should also be concerned.
Many people argued that the loss of some plants and animals cause devastating consequences. Firstly, lots of plants and animals are still principal food sources in many developing countries. Therefore, the loss of these species may affect many people, especially those who live in remote areas. Secondly, such plants and animals are interrelated, therefore, the loss of one species and lead to the loss of other species. For instance, many of the fish and marine life will die if the coral dies.
On the other hand, I support the idea that there are more serious environmental issues. Take air pollution as an example. Emissions from vehicles and factories may create serious health problems to humans such as lung cancer and respiratory diseases. What's more, global warming is exacerbating the situation. That is to say, when the heat waves, droughts and floods associated with climate change become more frequent and more intense, all living things suffer. For example, the natural habitat of polar bears is threatened seriously in the incidence of the melting ice and risen sea level.
In conclusion, although the decrease of plants and animals is a serious problem, I am of the opinion that other environmental problems should also be considered.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun flora seems to be countable; consider using: 'several florae', 'several floras'.
Suggestion: several florae; several floras
...While I agree that the disappearance of several flora and fauna is a serious problem, I belie...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...s lung cancer and respiratory diseases. Whats more, global warming is exacerbating th...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2125984252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86690956229 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.113127396 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315175621041 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091481143631 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766511897188 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180776605307 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513813031385 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun flora seems to be countable; consider using: 'several florae', 'several floras'.
Suggestion: several florae; several floras
...While I agree that the disappearance of several flora and fauna is a serious problem, I belie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...s lung cancer and respiratory diseases. Whats more, global warming is exacerbating th...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2125984252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86690956229 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.113127396 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315175621041 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091481143631 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766511897188 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180776605307 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513813031385 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.