The ways which people use to contain knowledge have changed due to the development of civilization. Immemorially. books are the dominant choice for awareness storage. In today's life, the Internet has become more and more commonly use. Despite there are some indisputable consequences, the method of using the Internet has been considered to have a variety of advantages than disadvantages.
To begin with, the Internet's security is confirmed to be insecure. Data that is loaded online could possibly be stolen by high-tech crime. Storing crucial information online will have to face permanent disappearance. For instance, there was a record of the loss of a Vietnamese author's works due to online storing and it takes an enormous price eventually.
On the other hand, online containing is guaranteed numerous dominant advantages that cover disadvantages. One of the most prominent features of the Internet is the finding section which allows the users to access the information within a second. In order to define a specific knowledge in thousands of books, it will take hours by hours and exceeding effort while the Internet not only can confirm it but also arrange it in the credibility order. In addition, the Internet sets no limit for containing the information, it has gigantic storage of human awareness in existing categories. For example, we can find data in science, literature, biology, etc. Last but not least, with the equipped flexibility, online containing permits us to modify the information or fix the inaccurate ones without aesthetic affection. It is incapable to insert up-to-date information in finished books. A prime example, when a data of a person on Wikipedia is considered to be different from the existing one, it is handy for those who are aware to refine it online.
In conclusion, the advantages of online storage are ensured to surpass the drawbacks due to the indispensable functions.
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- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 61
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done 84
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
The ways which people use to contain knowledge have changed due t...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Books
...elopment of civilization. Immemorially. books are the dominant choice for awareness s...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...be insecure. Data that is loaded online could possibly be stolen by high-tech crime. Storing c...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'specific knowledge'.
Suggestion: specific knowledge
...ion within a second. In order to define a specific knowledge in thousands of books, it will take hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24675324675 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07006229736 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1152796076 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138378107848 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395275028357 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372875955869 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789896188998 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406720248267 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.