Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development

With the rise of the Internet, some universities have opened online lessons for people. This is a promising development and this essay will discuss the reasons. To begin with, not everyone who capacity can attend colleges due to personal financial issues. Commencing online courses with affordable prices or even free ones deliver people equitable opportunity to approach advanced learning. Moreover, people do not require to approve the test to enhance an official student. Anyone can attend the class which is being taught by university professors if they are willing. A prime example, Harvard's professors have offered a free course for students around the world who desire to learn Harvard's educating methods. Thousands of students have submitted favorable feedback about the course's effect.
As a result, observing how a university's curriculum works can promote the student who is facing a dilemma in choosing an appropriate college. Students and their parents instantly express a sky-high expectation of the methods which professors use. By regarding lessons online, student's ambivalence can be reduced and support their decision. Moreover, student's strong suit will be exposed by identifying a field in detail, and they will be capable to follow the proper path. For instance, a student who is validating between medical and technology can have an objective view after exploring online courses. Last not least, online classes can aid students who are incompetent to attend face-to-face lessons by exceptional circumstances. For instance, during the pandemic students have no choice but to sign up for online lessons so they can keep on studying and review key knowledge.
In conclusion, although direct classes are considered to be more effective, courses on the Internet depict several perks, especially under special times.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32508833922 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75236212358 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8999742325 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276977533101 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811747515509 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05092454725 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159317722364 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809153999181 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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