It is believed that family has no longer stick together like they used to previously. This is occurring due to the increase in workloads but above all is technological entertainment. People have to recognise how important family is by spending more time with parents and siblings.
Modern society’s achievements require human’s contribution. This witnesses a significant influence on people’s workloads. As result, times spend for family have been decreasing faster. For instance, a Vietnamese city employee can work for about over 12 hours per day and sometimes they go to the office at weekends as well. Moreover, the development of social media and technological entertainment are showing family member’s separation. Children of this age spend most of their times on games or social media. They found themselves interested in virtual activities rather than family. For example, recent studies have shown that a child can spend times on modern devices for about 44,5 hours per week.
People’s awareness on family’s importance is the most necessary to deal with this situation. By recognising family’s significant role with each invidual, we can sort out our priorities for family. Family not only the place where we live but also in which we grow. We need to spend times as much as we could. Using our weekends and free times to call parents or hang out with siblings should be encouraged for shorten the gap. Specifically, administer chidren online time is exceedingly indispensable for giving them family’s activities. For instance, team-building activities during family’s times is a great solutions to get rid of the distance between each one.
In conclusion, working pressure and modern devices are major causes of family’s separation. To deal with this, know how family is needed is an encouraged ways which lead to times for members, brings everyone together.
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person Give reasons f 73
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include examples fr 84
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 67
- Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'solution'?
Suggestion: solution
...vities during family’s times is a great solutions to get rid of the distance between each...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35570469799 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01882894985 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7450966205 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184346682259 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602728012142 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356152298586 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125471131405 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191159914319 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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