Facing a dissatisfying situation is unavoidable. When it happens, some people chose to accept it immediately without trying to prevent it, while others believe that finding the solutions to the issues should be encouraged. In my point of view, solving a problem by effort is the right thing to do when facing difficulties.
To begin with, not every problem is born to be solved, some of them are used to give us acceptance and lessons. Sometimes we have to live on along with unwanted factors in order to support ourselves and our family. For instance, choosing a job does not depend on your ambition or strong suit mostly, it is decided on your ability to afford the money. Besides, an issue can not be dealt with in case of over handling problems, such as exceedingly injuries like broken arm or leg, in these cases, there is nothing we can do but accept it.
On the other hand, almost every appearing difficulty can be prevented if there are enough determination and effort. Some bad times are challenging our limits to see if we can pass and touch our goals. For example, the pupil who was born in a family which is unable to afford schools always do their best in order to be educated properly. Moreover, unsatisfactory periods that require enormous effort are the best tools to boost your skills and mind. Result in start-ups, suffering from the financial problem helps them widen their knowledge and shorten the path to success.
In conclusion, bad times always occur, and not every issue can be deal with but standing up and try are the best method to lead us out of the storm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68214285714 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57972619572 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.787605764 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193374465691 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593614034186 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408126079912 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105089386446 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364869260737 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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