It is a universally accepted statement that people used to live in their hometown for their whole life in the past .But now the scenario has been changed. Human beings are changing their living place for their reasons. Some people claim that it is a negative development. I strongly oppose view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraph.
First of all,people are changing their city due to some personal reasons like for Higher study purpose and employment.In small towns usually people do not get an opportunity for higher studies due to limited resources like teachers and pieces of equipment.For example in the small town people are not able to study more due to lack of types of equipment as piece of evidence, only one or two computer are in the lab so each person is people not able to do practicals in computer.In addition people are not able to study practical aspects of subject due to unavailability of equipment in labs and limited resource in library.At the same time in city people can learn subject They like from the experts and they can also use the lab with the latest equipment.
Consequently, Another reason why people are changing their city is due to employment problems. As compared to town in city people are able to get rich opportunities for jobs with higher salary packages in good Mnc companies.At the same time in town people are not able to get good job opportunities.
To sum up,change is part of life and always required for progress of mankind.people are changing their city for their own advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, for example, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85018726592 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78914337975 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524344569288 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.051613496 49.4020404114 443% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.875 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358752845606 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194612855592 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114552435478 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254244023334 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118604874422 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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