Over the years, there has been substantial change in people how they spend their leisure time. Some people opine that this change is worse and hence free time was better used in the past as compared it to now. This essay aims at presenting the arguments in favor and against of this statement. I personally believe that both circumstances have their own pros and cons.
People who believe that previous time was best because of these following reasons. The main one of them is used lessen technology. As people had an adequate time to spend it with their family and friends which not only helps to strengthen their bonds but also created better relationship among them. Moreover, people spent their most of their time to entertain themselves by playing football or cricket etc. Also, they utilized this time to pursue their interest in doing hobbies like gardening and painting. Further, in earlier times, people try to stay fit and healthy by engaged themselves into different activities such as running, digging and swimming which makes them physically and mentally stronger.
On the opposite side, most of the people use their spare moments in their own ways. Now, technology is enhancing at a pace rate. So, people find various games and socializing apps to keep themselves free from their hectic schedule. These games aid to relief them from stress buster life and entertain themselves too. Secondly, mostly individuals have a shopaholic nature. They used their time to buy trending clothes by visiting one shopping mall to another. Lastly, people have their busy agenda, and they do not get time to spend it with their loved ones. That is why people like to do outings with their family members and try different cuisines in popular restaurants and cafe. In this way, they always connected and attached with their family.
To sum up, even though there is a stark difference between in past and now. We can not really give a conclusive answer as to which case people made better use of their free time. Both scenarios have their own positive and negative sides. If the people wants to remain healthy then any kind of situation becomes worthy.
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...ence between in past and now. We can not really give a conclusive answer as to wh...
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... their own positive and negative sides. If the people wants to remain healthy then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, as to, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90934065934 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39207794432 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7217946624 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6956521739 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8260869565 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357729423409 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103833155445 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758674946144 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239407661952 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261153828592 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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