In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Today people can enjoy a huge amount of activities also including shopping as a kind of hobby. My essay below will analyze both the benefits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon.
Enjoying the process of shopping could be advantageous in some certain aspects. The first thing to be considered is that people can spend time together with their family and friends therefore could get memorable positive emotions. Moreover, today, in the era of high-speed life, shopping can help people to deal with stress and negative aspects of their lives.
From an opposite angle, the disadvantages of having such hobby like shopping are varied. One convincing argument in favour of such activity is high damage to people’s mental health. In recent years, the problem of «Shopaholism» causes serious concern among scientists and needs some specific treatment. Furthermore, it is generally felt that excess purchases could lead to budget problems and a huge amount of unnecessary cloth that people do not need but bought.
All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that having such hobby like shopping could be both positive and negative trend. From the one hand, shopping could bring a lot of positive emotions and could prevent stress as a pleasant pastime. However the opposite view is that «Shopaholism» today could be really harmful for peoples mind and bring a huge amount of mental disasters, what is more the problem of finance deficit could comprehend practically every person in todays life which is full of shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...d prevent stress as a pleasant pastime. However the opposite view is that «Shopaholism»...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21285140562 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73229353785 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1466599087 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134503725034 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514054433866 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304614651148 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805446356561 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184461957342 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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