People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern-day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Community in advance colony consume the drugs, however, the youngster is using drugs with a permit and without permits, at a very early age. Few sociologists believe that community and Guardians are usually held responsible.
The main cause for the usage of drugs by youth is, parents are not in touch with their children on daily basis, as they are usually busy with their schedules especially if they work too. Due to this fact, youngsters take the advantage of this act of their parents and they do what they like to do. furthermore, the secondary reason is the community people with children mingle with, as this also plays a pivotal role that what kind of friendship or people they meet with or spend time with.
Moreover, by the usage of drugs, there can be severe effects on society. For example, if a youngster is consuming drugs on a daily basis, and if he/she is out of money then they can be violent and they can perform any unwanted act to fulfill the wish for their drug usage and can harm any member of the society. furthermore, it a huge stigma on the nation if the vast amount of youth is involved in drug addiction, as it is said that if you want to destroy any nation, make their youth addict to drugs.
In conclusion, I would like to suggest that, it all starts from your own home, in other words, parents will have to be extremely concern about their children and they have to keep their eyes on their children's moves and provide awareness about the consequences of the usage of drugs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...and can harm any member of the society. furthermore, it a huge stigma on the nation if the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56985294118 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39931045007 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.718313328 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.111111111 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149490113549 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653481754429 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486214630948 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092478957081 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039954204574 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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