People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologist claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse
There is no doubt that in this modern civilization people are commonly use drugs, while young people are trying with permitting and prohibiting drug which happen from an early age. Several sociologist believe that parents and other people in society sometimes deliver a bad habitual for them. In this essay I will explain more about the causes and the impact of widely using drug by youth in modern era and also some efficient suggestions to help people from drug abuse.
Development of technology in this modern era especially in communication had helped people to access drugs much easier than before. Furthermore, young people have a lot of time for surveying the internet instead to work and study. There are several illegal websites to commerce the illegal items such as drugs which easy to be accessed. Moreover, the illegal websites such as dark web being popular for young people in which they have a bunch of curiosity to make wrongdoing activity. Take America as an example, predominantly young people there using drugs in which they obtain it from dark web. Therefore, internet being first and foremost factor that make drugs easily to be accessed especially for youngster.
Some country prohibited drugs because it leads to addicted feeling for the consumer. Addicted feeling can make people cannot stop consuming those drugs. Moreover people who have been addicted with drugs are commonly cannot divided between responsibility and their desire. For example, drug users are often being irresponsible for their family some of them even try to kill their relative for getting money to buy drugs. Therefore using drugs very bad for people due to drugs have addiction substance. Enforcement security technology is needed for government to prevent young people accessing dark web. In the meantime strict regulations are crucial for repression act, so the young people will think more before using drugs.
To sum up, internet network currently is the main factor which is leading to drugs spread in society exceptionally for youngster. However, drugs have negative impact such as addicted feeling for the user which influence their life. Because of that, government should enforce their cyber security system for protecting young people from drugs abuse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sociologist seems to be countable; consider using: 'Several sociologists'.
Suggestion: Several sociologists
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ople cannot stop consuming those drugs. Moreover people who have been addicted with drug...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...elative for getting money to buy drugs. Therefore using drugs very bad for people due to ...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'drug'.
Suggestion: drug
... is the main factor which is leading to drugs spread in society exceptionally for you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25895316804 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55429695006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523415977961 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8430656774 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.473684211 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255685816034 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939167568411 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613602009694 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183491653597 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093722536372 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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