People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Drug addiction has become a serious problem in our society. It has spoiled dreams and aspirations of thousands of families. The fascinating story of the addicts is that once they accustomed to heinous habit, they cannot get rid of it regardless how they endeavour themselves. Especially, youth are used to drug abuse in my society. So, it is crucial to find the reasons behind their deadly habits. Very thoughtful decisions should be taken to help the youngsters to fight the drug abusing problems.
The first and foremost reason of this problem is due to peer- pressure. As young people hangs out most time with dearer and nearer pals and some may be drug abusers, who compel their chaps to do drugs. Secondly, we can see advertisements, films that show using drugs in seductive manner. The young have the habit of imitating whatever their best actor do, they no longer keep away themselves doing drugs. In long run, this little curiosity guides them to notorious drug abusers. Thirdly, young people have the attitudes of trying different things in their adolescents. As life is not a bed of roses, they may take drug to forget all their worries. Family problem, psychological problem and bad influences of friends can be very lethal sometimes as they are sometimes the root causes for young people to try drugs.
Doing drug spoils the peace and harmony of the family. The druggist son steals cash and kinds to purchase drugs. Later, the family is engulfed in debt. Another effect of the drug is it may take the life of drug abuser as they hardly give up evil anti- social habit. If drug abusers exchange the needle among friends, they are vulnerable to transmission of deadly disease like AIDS. In a society where young people abuse drugs, naturally the crime rates would be high there. More fights and murders could be observed in such areas and there must be personal, social and generation related problems related to widespread drug abusing. Only a single drug abuser in family can ruin the whole family and thus a generation declined to drug abusing would bring heinous problem to the country.
To wipe out drug from society educational programmes should be organised in school, colleges. Rehabilitation centres must be established to assess druggists. Advertisement of drugs, alcohol should be banned from the TV. Family should keep an eye on the bad companies their kids teenagers are spending time with and finally the family bonding and understanding should be strong enough to discourage the teenagers not to do something that would bring shame for the family. Governments must ensure that their law enforcing organizations are working hard to wipe out the illegal drug businesses from the country and strict laws should be imposed and implemented to punish the illegal drug business people.
To recapitulate, drug abusers are evil of family, society and nation. The responsible bureaucrats and government must crack down on drugs to utilize young blood for the progress of nation.
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...young blood for the progress of nation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273722627737 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.160583941606 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0912408759124 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043795620438 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474452554745 0.0437548338989 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0857664233577 0.122226691241 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0401459854015 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62482671854 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0419708029197 0.0326793684256 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0109489051095 0.00163938923432 668% => OK
Determiners: 0.0766423357664 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0383211678832 0.021408717616 179% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00912408759124 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3015.0 1933.35771543 156% => OK
No of words: 499.0 316.048096192 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04208416834 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.20517956788 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376753507014 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250501002004 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162324649299 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118236472946 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62482671854 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.037074148 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543086172345 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 66.2801894885 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0891783567 180% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 17.2068965517 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7103875031 49.517814964 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.965517241 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2068965517 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.344827586207 0.814263465372 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 42.2569967521 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.58695652174 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193550337384 0.332605444948 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0798673139734 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0509133281651 0.0668466124924 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455697662849 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141503307021 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777318230047 0.134430193775 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049982041124 0.0742795772207 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417771612586 0.324371583561 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0604420591209 0.0638462369009 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147775804891 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327716043296 0.058150111329 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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