People are likely to be a self employment
The entrepreneurship wave is widespread across the globe when more and more younger people prefer having their own businesses rather than working for companies or factories. Although the issue has both merits and demerits, from my perspective, its merits are overshadowed by its numerous demerits.
There are two reasons why youngsters are likely to be self-employed. First of all, they can work based on their ideas, favorites, but not under pressure from others. They are free to create, develop in the work they do. They do not go to work on time or get punished by managers if they make mistakes. They will become bosses and hire people to work for them. Secondly, many people hope to be richer in the future. Currently, many self-employed people have been successful and become billionaires such as Bill Gates or Jack Ma. They believe their ideas could be developed to bring fame, fortune, for them.
However, there are several drawbacks to this. According to statistics, only 3% of startups achieve success. There is no guarantee that they will earn enough money including capital and daily expenses to live a comfortable life. Since they must work both day and night, they are not able to spend time with their families and their friends. Thus, it creates an imbalance in their work and personal life. If their daily routine is always changing, it will affect their health adversely. Moreover, when they fail, they may be in default on loan and not be able to find a solution.
In conclusion, working for oneself is definitely beneficial for young people because it enables them to work on their own terms; however, there are drawbacks such as the lack of guaranteed paycheck that needs to be considered before choosing to be an entrepreneur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
... wave is increasing worldwide. More and more younger are prefer to have their own business r...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...ng worldwide. More and more younger are prefer to have their own business rather than ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ished by anyone if they make a mistake. They will become a boss and hire people to w...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... billionaires such as Bin Gates, Jack Ma,... They think their ideas have the oppor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02105263158 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80586818575 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4845655426 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174673546603 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498838255042 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822329113726 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986954069117 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717100539277 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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