Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many people argue that world health issues should be received the most interest by scientific research rather than others problems. In my opinion, I firmly hold the view that the crucial issue was the health of humans.
On the one hand, recently the world face up with many general problems, and each country, each cutural has private problems which need certain solutions for certain circumstances. Firstly, the majority of nations on the Earth witnessed pollution: Water pollution, air pollution, and soil pollution,... It originates from human activities, smoke, water waste from factories, using pesticides,... which release CO2 and methane, and many kinds of waste,... lead to contaminate the environment. For example, in Beijing city in China, air pollution increases the fog in the sky that obstructs visibility. Secondly, another issue noteworthy is war. Besides the peace of almost all countries, there are few areas with opposite status. Their residents cope with the enemy, and property damage, and may be lost their families, even their lives whenever, wherever. This life seems difficult to expect a bright future. For instance in Ukraine, because of the war with Russia, people have to evacuate to other countries, and life changed from being normal to being deprived of everything.
On the other hand, broadening our knowledge about health need to put the heart of research issues. The first reason for that is to improve the health of society. If we are ill, we may not be able to work so knowing how to cure disease, people can do everything, earn money for their life, contribute and involve to the development of nations. In addition, the pain from the disease will reduce which result from scientist finding medicines, and cures. Last but not least, prolong human life. Thanks to many surveys, and researches, recently most diseases are curable, saving many lives. For example, in Covid-19, all activities have to pause, many shops close, and people working online, but almost all scientific research about health, finding Vaccines as fast as possible. Although Covid took the lives of many people in the beginning when we have Vaccines, it protects our health, life becomes more safety, and activities go on as usual.
In conclusion, research about health problems should be focused on by scientists, I believed it is the most important amongst many recent problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22480620155 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65852923832 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594315245478 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 0.809619238477 1359% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7124868872 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175237976313 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471620505686 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665745082367 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151895635209 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091501096063 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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