People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Some people believe that advertising has a negative effect on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a popular belief that modern people are bombared with all sorts of advertisements that is a negative development. While this issue has several conductive effects, I am completely against it.
On the one hand, advertisements attribute to customers confused with providing the abundant information of products. The contents offered by products commercial are often exaggerated, and thus customers are disappointed as it does not meet their needs. Instant noodles, whose packages present a bowl with fresh and plentiful ingredients, but contain only seasoning powder inside, are exemplified for this argument. In addition, commercials induce children to consum detrimental products, as a significant portion of it is unhealthy food adverstisements. Encouraging vulnerable children to consum high-calories junk foods cause obesity and heart diseases, which impede children’s stage of well-being in the long-run.
On the other hand, customers can make better choices by reffering from advertisements. Specifically, advertising activities act as a great source of information which customers could draw on and make comparisions among the myriad of merchandises. Moreover, advertisements reduce the rate of unemployment. Today, advertising campaigns of multinational companies, one of which is Unilever, have been successful that their products almost dominance the market. As a result, producers enjoy an increase in sale, so they would expand their production and hire more workers. This explains why the companies could create jobs for millions of people around the world.
In conclusion, it is safe to say that advertisements offer both drawbacks and benefits. However, I am completely convinced with the fact that advertising activities provide with more beneficial effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...children to consum detrimental products, as a significant portion of it is unheal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84291187739 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37888460494 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662835249042 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.432082881 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144344369748 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498905041615 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678829332756 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099145142661 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581239518216 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.