People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, there has been a significant increased in buying cheaper products. While there are some drawbacks to this trend, I believe that the demerits far overshadow the merits.
On the one hand, there are a myriad of benefits associated with purchasing products which are less expensive. firstly, being able to buy cheaper goods means that people could potentially save money, and therefore they would have these savings to spend on other aspects of life. For example, they can use those money on high-quality education and healthcare for their children, which may promote people’s welfare. Secondly, when the prices of products are low, individual would have an incentive to buy more. This leads to the success of companies in making profits and in turn there will be a higher rate of economic growth.
On the other hand, there are some potential downsides when it comes to choosing cheaper goods. One of the most striking consequences is excessive shopping. It can be explained tha when the prices of products are low, people will consider less carefully before they decide to buy something. Therefore, people will be likely to waste a huge amount of money on unnecessary goods. Another concern is that when the price of a product is lower, the net profit which is generated by that product will fall. This means that if there is a decrease in sales, producers might experience a huge loss of money and they may therefore leave the market.
In conclusion, I suppose that spending money on cheaper products cause many significant effects. Whilst there are some merits to this trend, in my opinion, the disadvantages of buying inexpensive goods outweigh the advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: myriads
...merits. On the one hand, there are a myriad of benefits associated with purchasing ...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...sing products which are less expensive. firstly, being able to buy cheaper goods means ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...ects of life. For example, they can use those money on high-quality education and healthcar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07168458781 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69066551023 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4423902097 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224331007703 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696252461115 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530827158574 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138315322211 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403942995485 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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