It is widely acknowledged that there are
difficulties that urban dwellers have to deal with in their daily life. From my viewpoint, these challenges might be overcrowded spaces as well as related to the environment.
People living in urban areas feel uncomfortable because of two issues. First, most large cities are filled with the enourmous number of people, especially during rush hours when people commute to work from homes. This can create traffic congestions or massive use of transportation means. For instance, in Tashkent city, people have wake up at 6 and commutung takes up two hours everyday. Second, city residents have to also confron environmental issues. There, heavy use vehicles contribute to air pollution but also to noise one. Combustion-engine cars not only emit fumes containg carbon emissions but also make a lot of noise which can irritate residents of cites. This can lead to the health-related issues like breathing and deterioration of climate.
It appears that governments ought to motivate people to settle down in rural areas. They can make regional towns more appealing to people by improving the infrastructure of such areas. For example, public education facilities and healthcare systems should be improved to ensure that everyone can access to them in rural settings. Moreover, some job opportunities should be also created in these places such as business hubs where people can work, earning a stable income. As a result, people in big cities can be tempted to pive in regional areas.
All in all, I believe that if governments do not take measures to convince people to move to regional areas, large populations of cities can put burden on their infrastructure and people from countrysides can continue to migrate to cosmopolitan cities in search of decent life and job.
- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologist claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the causes and 61
- The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000 It also predicts figures for 2025 78
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work education or shopping To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- In some countries owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 73
- More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past Why Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...It is widely acknowledged that there are difficulties that urban dwellers have to...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...p at 6 and commutung takes up two hours everyday. Second, city residents have to also co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21501706485 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96325935574 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9019131993 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205521648578 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642787591926 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510887557915 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988459765034 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639973896501 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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