People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays inhabitants of city center could suffering many challenges in their day today life including over crowding, health problems associated with pollution, robbery and so on. This essay will discuss these problems and writers view about citizens should encourage to move on country side.
The foremost problem caused by congestion is pollution , communicable diseases, and problems related to unemployment. many peoples all over the crowded cities has health hazardous factors such as contamination in water, air and ecosystem. Pollution acquired by lack of drainage system, deficiency of purified water, improper disposal of waste materials as well.Moreover, over population would make thieves, extortion, followed by joblessness. For example, a famous city in India is Mumbai made many slums and dilemma and peoples who live in face many difficulties in their daily life.
With regards to the opinion of writer, governments made action towards the natives to transfer some other places would minimize the problem but it will not be vanish out. In fact, authorities should encourage everyone to co operate each other and diminish the causative factors by health education, proper disposal of waste. Furthermore, citizens should stimulate to avoid usage of plastic fossil fuels and so on. There by promote companies and offices to prioritize jobs for the residence first.
To conclude, in my perspective, migration to smaller towns would not be a perfect solution to cure the issues in cities. At once everyone should inspire each other to mitigate the difficulties and government should help them to be succeed in city center to be problem free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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...ge everyone to co operate each other and diminish the causative factors by health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45525291829 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8511117851 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9201470024 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339278274053 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100295369427 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743652029374 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180085664926 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691292652996 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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