People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regionasl towns?
More and more people are living in large cities nowadays. due to the great attraction and job opportunities being offered in the big city, the urban dwellers are suffering from extreme density, traffic congestion and air pollution. From my perspective, if governments will motivate people to relocate to peripheral towns, it will benefit them in terms of better life quality. In addition, the local community will also enjoy from development.
The major problem affecting large cities' citizens is density, which is obviously the main cause of traffic. Moreover, the increasing amount of cars has caused to a significant growth in pollution levels. For example, Tel Aviv has become one of the most crowded cities in Israel, hence, during the morning hours it is almost impossible to reach there by car. Furthermore, some people have started to wear a face mask against pollution.
However, the government and definitely contribute in order to tackle these problems by encourage people to live in a smaller towns. Firstly, such a change will help remarkably to develop the rural areas in terms of new jobs and facilities. Secondly, the new residents would also earn a higher life quality including cleaner air, larger homes and less traffic. For instance, due to the industrial center that was built in Yokneam (a small city in the north region), many families chose to move to that area. As a result, this area has experienced a massive development and has become extremely popular.
In conclusion, people who live in central crowded cities are forced to fight with traffic and pollution. In my opinion, governments should aid to improve the citizens' life by attract poeple to live in peripheral regions. Innovation like that will be beneficial to the locals as well as to th new residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...le are living in large cities nowadays. due to the great attraction and job opportu...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
..., governments should aid to improve the citizens life by attract poeple to live in perip...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09152542373 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75203301624 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.290910721 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267756529965 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782110217055 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905928018903 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146513323647 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246055562398 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.