People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
This writing is an attempt to address the issue of causes and problems of living in a large city leading dilemma to metropolitans. Undeniably well-developed progress has played an important role in bringing serious problems to living life. Therefore, their causes and solutions are in need to be clarified as follows:
Suffice to say, the most significant reasons of difficult lifestyle in the big town is facing crowd in rush hours resulting in not enough bogies for commuters. Many people have to wake up before 4 a.m. for catching early trains instead spending time at the platforms. Some townsfolk decide to use the other public transportations such as bus, taxi, and underground; however, passengers who use these mentioned vehicles still experience terrible traffic jam, therefore causing being late.
By this account, the possible solutions need to be considered in detail, one of which is that distributing development and quantity of people to other provinces so what reduces congestion in a large city nowadays. This change will have an effect on economic growth; giving an opportunity to people living in rural area access to services or education at the same standard as the big city. Another obvious solution is that increasing the number of bogies per train not only skytrain accounted the most popular transportation but also diesel train connecting suburban to downtown. However, the latter approach requires much more money than moving to smaller cities.
In conclusion, although the problems of living in a large city are regarded serious and cause heavy burden to society, those are feasible way to recover the whole system accordingly. So, I would like to suggest that government choose the destination of moving citizen carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87724845529 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667857142857 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7362061398 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250338714779 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802884030277 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450225629016 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132856989705 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357514187608 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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