The big cities have a bustling beat, happy, full of life and comfort. Beside that , there are still serious problems that people have to face to every day. I think governments should encourage people to move to smaller regional towns .
Over population , pollution and traffic problem are three main problems we need to deal now in large city. Firstly ,the rate of unemployment,criminals, homless, poverty are increasing when more and more people go to live in metropolis . It create an unsafe environment and make residents worry especially some families which have children . The truth is living with fear is never comfortable so if you have baby , you should live in small cities or your countryside where you were born . Secondly , two serious kind of pollution currently are air pollution and noise pollution. Emissions, dust, exhaust gases from factories, types of transport such as co2, so2 which cause some diseases and axic rain. Noise from vehicles on the street and building sites can male some people annoyed and uncomfortable especially old people and children . Finally , traffic jams every day especially in rush hours can lead to the late for work of some people and traffic accidents which caused many pity deaths . To limited and decrease these problems, governments seem to be should encourage people to move to some smaller towns.
On the other hand ,big cities also have some advantages so that people choose these place to live and build career . there are a lot of paid - well jobs because of having a lot of big company so it attact many people came here to earn job especially educated people .In addition , they have almost everything you need such as supermarket,cinemas restaurants,entertainment center and so on ; therefore,your lfe will be very convenient and easy
in conclusion, if I were to choose one of the two places to live and develop my career, a big city or a peaceful countryside, i wiil choose the second .what about you ?
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 47
- Nowadays schoolchildren and students are taught to be competitive towards their classmates and aren t encouraged to help the weaker students Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages 65
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 56
- Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary you feel necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. 78
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98773006135 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05041258329 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610429447853 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.111106271 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332418671456 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121412636157 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116415624929 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205330661945 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127755740943 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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