Humans who lives in Metro cities in today's contemporary era, face certain challenges in their routine life. This essay would shed lights on valid problems in subsequent paragraphs.
In this modernize world, certain people face innumerable of problems in there daily life such as increasing pollution in mega cities. Some citizens have to go through Lungs disease because of impure air. Moving further to, increasing population result significant provocation in accomodating people. Homeless, squatting and slum areas are common place. If people have to travel to one area to another for employment they have various types of transportation. However, all public transportation are overcrowded in peak office hours and it may take up to 2 to 3 hours to reach there desirable destination. And if they wish to travel by personal vehicle they may have to face heavy traffic.
Government should uplift people shift to smaller cities. Because there are plethora of the advantages are there such as accomodation is much cheaper as compared to large cities. However, unemployment will be less because of more companies and tourism will invest in new areas in fact land cost is also less as compared to mega cities. Crime rate will be vanished due to less population along with availability of jobs new opportunities will created and people will fulfill there daily necessity easily.
To cap it all, everyday problems in large cities vary from long commute time to unhealthy levels of pollution. I agree that authorities should encourage people to move to regional tows to alleviate this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...lability of jobs new opportunities will created and people will fulfill there daily nec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2265625 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84064691617 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8897559088 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278446641665 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829803361494 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849685535642 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16992068836 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786847881993 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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