The given pie chart manifest the online sales for retail shops in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. The given data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with, In 2003 the Travel sales online were at 36% which gradually decrease to 29% in 2013. As well as, the Clothes sector also reduce the selling as it was 24% in 2003 but later on in 2013 it becomes to 16%. However, there are some sectors which also grew up more sales than these two and they were Books and Film\Music. Moving towards, books you can see that in 2003 they were at only 19% but later on in 2013 it raises to 22% which is outstanding. Likewise, the Film\Music were also booming in 2013 rather than 2003 because of the new artists coming day by day.
To cap it all, it is vividly seen that travel and Clothes sectors were going down in these past years but as you know the other two sectors Books and Film\Music were prospering in the later years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, well, you know, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34104046243 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09867191409 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3046994506 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208632554208 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108406126456 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122765798511 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162959756222 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109653517809 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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