Nowadays, with rapid increase in the population most of the urban cities are getting heavily congested. Heavy traffic at peak hours, inflation and pollution are few of the major problems which people are exposed to. However, great responsibility lies on government shoulder, and they should take prevention actions to curb the significant issues before it is too late.
On one hand, these days major big cities are rapidly transforming into hi-tech cities offering a plethora job opportunity to most of the citizens. Due to the same reason, it is observed most of the people from surrounding small cities migrate to big cities for livelihood which leads to a lot of air pollution, noise and water pollution and traffic congestion. For example, in big cities it is usually seen traffic jam extends to several kilometer making it difficult for the people to reach their destination on time. People living in such cities possess busy schedule due to which they face many health problems like blood pressure, diabetes at a very early age and are more prone to natural disaster like earthquake and flood.
However, the role of government in taking care of their citizens and infrastructure development go and in hand, and administration executive should come up with some interesting plans to deviate people to smaller nearby towns. By this way a lot of congestion will be reduced, and other surrounding towns will get an opportunity to get developed. For example. Japan government has come up with smart cities concept where they are enhancing the tier two and three cities, and opening many special economic zones, so that most of the top companies can set up their operations. Not only this but also, when people will move to open areas, they will have more time to invest on their health instead of being stuck at maddening crowd.
In Conclusion, I would reiterate excess of everything is bad and can be fatal, hence towns and area municipality should take special steps into consideration to help their citizens in living a peaceful and heathy life.
- The older you get life becomes more difficult Discuss Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 89
- In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas 78
- Nowadays more and more movies and music are available on internet at free of cost Is this positive or negitive development Give the valid reasons 84
- It is more important to have a good family than to have friends Family can always compensate for absence of friendship To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...Japan government has come up with smart cities concept where they are enhancing the ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04385964912 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72143693801 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0991544709 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.75 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275211279569 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809468162064 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456337566597 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145026366922 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033835684943 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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