When famous people complain about the way the media publicize their private lives in some countries, It is said that celebrities should accept it as a part of their lives. This essay will show my partly agree opinion toward this statement.
To begin with, if someone becomes famous, they need bid by their own privacy. Basically, when become an idol or celeb, your own life will be shown at a lot of social media, so it is too hard to avoid follow up by journalists or photographers. Because of gill yourself and talent to make money when audience is the person who pay for this celeb, so they do have permission to know your own life. One famous singer of USA is said that when you got money from audience, you need to brung your life to make fun, you can't want to not only got money but also hold your privacy.
On the other hand, the act is stalking, also known by the name papparazi, a group or person always follow up one celeb and record all their activities. Most of information that papparazi offers is the fake or negative news. Many famous people face to incorrect news and it can bring many dangerous consequenses to this celeb. Typically, Bae Suzy, an actor from South Korea, tolerate many stress in social media, she is boycott by one fake new without any envident
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eed to brung your life to make fun, you cant want to not only got money but also hol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50214592275 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33844540605 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639484978541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0711577631 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203697956427 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880764567029 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177722337548 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184295626992 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194904893829 0.056905535591 343% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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