People in many countries do not wear their traditional costume. Some argue that they would forget their history and tradition. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, a topic of discussion is raising that citizens who do not wear their traditional clothes are indicating the unrespectful attitude to their country’s history and tradition. There are both for advocating and against this view, I believe it depends on different reasons.
It is undeniable that the nation’s unique costume has a profound meaning, which means if people do not wear it frequently day in and day out, they are encountering their culture. Firstly, bearing traditional costumes reminds people of many distinct characteristics of their area. In addition, how people perceive their conventional costume shows the extent to which they are willing to respect and retain their cultural heritage. For example, in Vietnam, schoolgirls are regulatorily required to wear Ao Dai, a traditional dress, as a custom being handed down from generation to generation. Secondly, the traditional costume’s presence in many social settings plays a crucial role. To be more specific, those costumes are required on many occasions, either formal or informal, either for everyday occasions or for festivals and formal wear, both have cultural meanings. As a result, the role of traditional costumes in culture is undisputed, wearing those clothes frequently can reflect the national identity and the pride of their nationality comparing with neighborhoods.
However, I am more convinced that although traditional costumes are worthy of people’s concern and should be preserved, however it does not necessarily mean that one should wear it all the time. Initially, people wear clothing in general for functional reasons. Particularly, traditional costumes are of cultural and social importance but might not suit every circumstances, we have to aware when and where is available to wear conventional dresses. For instance, exercise clothes are needed while people participate in physical activity, competitions and sports. Besides, dressing in a standard manner is a demonstration of respect, the key to mutual trust, especially in integration time. Consequently, not wearing traditional clothes frequently is not deserved to be considered meanly due to the social and novel awareness, by contrast, it implies invisibly the modern consciousness of the country within every international meeting.
In conclusion, while reasons can be given to justify that the nation’s unique wardrobes should be wore constantly to interpret the unforgettable heritage, I think this is not an accurate statement under any circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2785.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 513.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42884990253 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88924532109 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553606237817 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 885.6 506.74238477 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.063382895 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.0625 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0625 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170795323129 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617000980546 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619769839105 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129085499331 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031451100857 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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