People always have different situations that can change their lives. Someone who loves taking risks will be ready for them. However, most people are afraid of making even small changes, so they prefer to resist them. In this essay I want to show drawbacks of resisting changes and solutions to overcome it.
It is interisting that people don’t really notice that resistance is happening. Humans should understand that moving house, changing studying or workplace and other changes can help to improve the situations and conditions in life.
Nevertheless people choose resisting making changes, which have big backwards like loosing opportunities and degradation. For instance, one person resisted starting a startup business because he did not know results that can lead this change. Maybe he could become more successful or could find various ways to develop what he have. However, people are afraid to lose something that they already have and they do not notice opportunities that can be missed. Not to make a mistake we should weigh pros and cons of new changes in our life and decide to continue or to resist this new opportunity.
Furthermore, as I mentioned, resisting making changes can lead degradation which means stopping in one level and not developing yourself. One cause of it could be judgement from other people. In other words, we all worry about opinions and views on us, also we want to be perfect person who will not disappoint others. In this case, people should understand that results of changes have impact only on his life and that human can make mistakes. Moreover, it is impossible to be liked by everyone. To avoid resisting changes because of judgement we have to talk to our family members or with close friends to know that these changes are necessary for us, because only oppinions of our close people are important and honest with us. They can give valuable advices and show the right way to act.
To summarize, people should learn how to accept now changes and avoid resisting making changes, because world is changing day to day. We have to enjoy every moment and take every thing like experience, so the changes will not be scary fir us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...the situations and conditions in life. Nevertheless people choose resisting making changes,...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to resist'.
Suggestion: to resist
...ns in life. Nevertheless people choose resisting making changes, which have big backward...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ld find various ways to develop what he have. However, people are afraid to lose som...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake we should weigh pros and cons of new changes in our life and decide to contin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95367847411 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54711121512 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528610354223 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1397674412 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309618508445 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095338823776 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683073597664 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181368647481 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498802582439 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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