People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
In recent years, individuals sleeping hours have been less than ever. This essay will firstly, discuss the prominent causes of this epidemic and secondly, describe the possible corollaries of it.
In my opinion, the foremost purposes of the short-hours sleeping problem are an inactive lifestyle in addition to improper use of smartphones. Today more and more people are used to drinking a lot of coffee and fizzy drinks, especially during the night which contain a chemical substance called caffeine that causes sleeping issues like insomnia. Additionally, recently humans have been using their cell phones before sleeping which makes them spend plenty of time on social media and other apps without even noticing how many hours they spend on their phones therefore they end up sleeping late hours at night.
The feasible consequences of this dilemma include mental health troubles along with loss of productivity. First of all, not getting enough sleep could result in incorrect functioning of the human brain and contribute to the risk of developing some serious illnesses for instance, as several sleeping hours decrease the possibility of having psychological diseases like anxiety disorder and depression increases. Secondly, less sleeping periods people are more likely to suffer from stress and tiredness and unfortunately, this diminishes their performance. For example, it has been proven that men and women who don't have sufficient sleep need to put more effort into completing some tasks compared with adequate sleep people.
In conclusion, everyone should take it seriously when they want to sleep and make sure to sleep well by avoiding any drink that contains caffeine at night in addition, avoid using their mobiles before sleeping to ensure they will be active and healthy during their day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39084507042 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64513970045 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1353491932 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.1 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189958740029 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789515702254 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408656070581 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118229236378 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160454380136 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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