People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
It has been a norm that today’s people deprive themselves of sleep more than they did in a few decades ago. The fast-paced development of modern technology is believed to shoulder much of the blame and as a result, a growing number of people are now diagnosed with serious mental changes.
There are several factors which make the time people spend sleeping reduce substantially. First and foremost, they are willing to sacrifice their priceless time which should be used for sleeping just to finish reading the new updates on their social media or watching the latest episode on Netflix. In doing so, the blue light released from the laptop or phone’s screen accidentally stimulates part of the brain that makes them feel alert instead of drowsy or sleepy. As a result, a standard 8 hours which is vital for their body to take a rest and function properly is decreased to only 4 or 5 hours. Another rationale behind the dearth of sleep in today’s society is a great deal of pressure that both children and adults have to tolerate from schools or the workplace. When it comes to an important exam , students have no choice but to pull an all-nighter to cram up all the necessary knowledge. The same happens with adults who are frequently snowed under with deadlines and tons of heavy workload.
It is blindingly obvious that if individuals do not have adequate sleep, the repercussions will be more problematic than expected. As the first reason being mentioned before, people who constantly expose themselves to the blue light emitted from the screen of the modern device are prone to depression, as well as diabetes and cardiovascular problems. Furthermore, insufficient sleep has a direct impact on the brain, thus making it harder to form new memories and consolidate knowledge that people have learnt in a day. This explains why students who have spent all the night studying for an exam are likely to give poorer performance compared with those who hit the sack early. What is more ,individuals who don’t sleep enough will often be more aggressive and pessimistic than ones who enjoy a full and healthy sleep. Hence, their relationship with the others is likely to suffer since they are usually in a bad mood or become more squeamish than ever that they are ready to get into a conflict.
In conclusion, modern devices are mainly to blame for sleep deprivation and correspondingly, it entails a host of problems relating to people’s mental health and their social circle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95724465558 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74758204896 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58432304038 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1191063531 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4375 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3125 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213845608095 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064931564346 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464496080535 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121660691488 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415210337127 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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