Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?
Downloading verified music and books from the internet has long been free and available for every Internet user. However, I don’t think this is a positive development as while it gives us the chance to enjoy reading and listening entertainingly without paying, we are abusing the authors and the composers’ intellectual property.
On the one side, an access to boatloads of music and books opens the door for a whole new world of knowledge and masterpieces. With just an amount of money paid for the WIFI network every month, people can enjoy listening to music from a wide range of website with a high quality audio of up to 320kbps or read different updated books whenever they want. This brings beneficial advantages for people who can’t afford paying a large amount of money to buy books, especially the foreign ones whose tax is doubled when it comes to buying the original version. Having offline music enables people to entertain themselves when they are on the train, in their workplace or where there is no presence of the WIFI. For instance, I usually open the offline playlist of jazz music to help me concentrate on studying when I am in a library or even at home when I don’t want to be disturbed by the social media ‘s notifications.
On the other side, it would be extremely unfair for the creators who have spent ages publishing their brainchild. Whereas people take only 3 minutes or 3 days to listen to a song or accomplishing reading a book, the authors are paid for a certain amount of money and then watch their products being spread all over the Internet without proper sources. Even though it is not considered to be illegal, suppose we are in their position, it would be a feeling of bitterness and disconsolateness that their time and efforts deserve more than that. A lot of singers, composers and authors are fighting everyday to gain justice for their brainchild by removing their creations from websites which illegally steal the music or books without permission. Furthermore, the service of providing these free entertainments are gradually disappearing and instead, they offer a small charge for every song or book people want to download. Though it is inconvenient at first, let’s look from a different perspective, it’s a way to show respect and create motivations for the authors as well as the composers to continue publish newly attractive products for us to enjoy.
To conclude, it’s generally a negative development that if we continue to use the other’s intellectual properties without paying, it is just a matter of time until we have nothing to entertain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...tellectual property. On the one side, an access to boatloads of music and books opens t...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
... advantages for people who can’t afford paying a large amount of money to buy books, e...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ers, composers and authors are fighting everyday to gain justice for their brainchild by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92533936652 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85214804481 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549773755656 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2367597899 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257148988621 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937298934563 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614500588625 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153138196099 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685554838813 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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