People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, people have a tendency to take their families with them when they have to work overseas. When I accept that bringing family abroad may have some drawbacks, I am of the opinion that the benefits are greater.
On the one hand, living abroad can be highly beneficial for several reasons. One of the key advantages is that members in the family can get access to better education and higher standard of living. As long as the spouse has a chance to work in a high quality workplace with a high paying wage, other members can gain a better environment to develop, legal protection and fairness in numerous aspects. For instance, many families are moving from developing countries to developed countries for their betterment of life standard. Another advantage is that governments in many developed countries such as America, Australia, etc have launched many appropriate policies in terms of safety to ensure that migrants can adapt to new environments
On the other hand, I would argue that the advantages of moving to a new country pale in comparison with the disadvantages. Foremost among these is the potential for losing cultural and traditional values. This is because they follow the host country’s cultural norms in their daily lives which makes them away from their origin countries’ values. A recent study by Cambridge university found that nearly 40% of children who moved to another country due to their parents’ work has lost their own countries’ traditions. The second drawback that should be taken into consideration is culture shock. Members in the family may have to experience culture shock when they move to a country where the culture is very different from the culture they got used to. Consequently, it can lead to several problematic issues such as homesickness, irritation, etc and also put more weight on the negative side of their lives.
In conclusion, despite several drawbacks that bringing family abroad has, it seems to me that they are far outweighed by the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03869047619 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78009806013 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6056087888 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322592185469 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102705893025 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804346878802 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19417044328 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596475176877 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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