Task 2: People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Today individuals are likely to go abroad for work purposes with the companion of their family members. Despite some drawbacks, I believe that the overall benefits of this are more significant pertaining to job efficiency and children’s maturation.
On the one hand, moving alone to a different country to work may have detrimental impacts on individual families. People working outside their territory to support their family have to deal with an apparently new environment as well as be separated from their family by time and distance. They tend to find themselves lonely and isolated which can result in bad habits. The negative ramifications of this are not limited to the individuals who come to another country for job prospects. Their civil partners at home have to take on all responsibility for family issues. It is stressful for them to co-parent their children and do every household task while they also go to work to make ends meet.
On the other hand, moving to a new country as a family for work purposes helps to promote job efficiency. They no longer suffer from loneliness and boredom because they have their family by their side. Family bond helps to assuage their stress at work and hold their back in any situations they may get into. Family is the encouragement for everyone to intensely concentrate on their career to achieve their goals. In addition, when the family stays together, the children have a chance to be brought up by both parents. It is imperative for kids to be well formed characters in the first steps of their life. Being raised in a full family, they receive emotional support during their formative years that helps them to develop themselves more comprehensively.
In conclusion, I hold the conviction that bringing family together while working abroad is far more advantageous than leaving them behind. Therefore, they need to take it into great consideration before making any decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 628, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for them to co-parent their children and do every household task while they also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07788161994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82117458141 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6550176534 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359237708359 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108102119613 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453272636853 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203846747657 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666265833393 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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