Throughout the centuries people have always been debating and attempting to discover and develop the best method for their societies to be governed. The ultimate goal of this never-ending discussion is to find out what makes a society ideal for its citizens. Despite all the effort, little progress has been made, since people are not any closer to forming an ideal society today than they were a few centuries before.
In my opinion, an ideal society has one major characteristic. This relates to the individual members of the society, and the various ways they cooperate together. In countries such as Norway, the citizens of every town develop a strong community spirit by offering their services to the general public in more than one way. For example, people cooperate together, in order to cook meals for the homeless or clean public areas. As a result, people realize by firsthand the needs of their community, and at the same time learn to cooperate with each other.
Now, creating an ideal society is a demanding procedure, that requires a lot of time. I believe that the cornerstone of every civilization is its educational system. In other words, the only way to develop the perfect society is to teach its children by a very young age to respect and to interact with each other. This could happen if schools encouraged their young students to work together and conduct surveys on the needs of their hometown. For instance, in New Zealand, there are special programs for young folk under which local residents communicate with students and report to them any complaint they have. Then, the students collect their reports and forward them to the competent local authorities. In this way, people from a very young age, understand the problems of their society, and take positive action towards solving them.
In conclusion, I consider as ideal a society, where its citizens cooperate with each other to take care of their day-to-day needs. The only way to develop for a society to develop a strong community spirit is through its educational system.
- Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified There are more beneficial ways to spend this money To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007 Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate Write at least 150 words 73
- The diagram shows how the glass is recycled
- In some countries people spend long hours at work Why does this happen Is it positive or negative development 78
- The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time excluding email Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...pirit by offering their services to the general public in more than one way. For example, peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99420289855 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62950476632 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.217779317 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235982639974 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885199426209 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114878590208 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151947304742 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642536043504 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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