People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society
How can we create an ideal society?
Constructing a quintessential civilization has, from the dawn of time, become the greatest delusion of humankind but no civilization in the flow of history had successfully turned this dream into reality. From my perspective, an ideal society needs to satisfy certain requirements and the establishment of this depend upon the concerted effort of people from several segments of the society
To initiate, there is a variety of factors that can be expressed by a perfect society. One fundamental element is that an ideal society needs to be free-from-pollution. There seems to be evidence that the environmental aspects are always the prerequisite when assessing a society since they have a profound influence on the others. By the way of exemplifying, citizens in a fresh environment are more open-minded, robust, and tolerant as well as less aggressive and uncivil when compared to their counterparts living in a deteriorated surrounding, according to scientific research. Another constituent of a perfect society that worth considering is equality. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that only when people all have a fully accessible to education, medication as well as the basic human rights can they be considered as living in a dream civilization.
Concerning actions that should be taken to accomplish an ideal society, there will be, unfortunately, gradual and painstaking progress. One straightforward and effective measure that we can do is to raise public awareness about the importance of environment protection as well as a sense of responsibility for enhancing the quality of their surrounding habitat. Furthermore, governments should have amendments to the current legislative system as well as enforced new codes or laws with the inclination towards widening human rights. Imposing policies in order to support homeless people to overcome their darkest time can be a suitable case in point
In conclusion, an ideal society in my point of view is made from these aforementioned factors and to raise public awareness as well as modify the legislation is firmly necessary for making society a perfect place
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rights'' or 'right's'?
Suggestion: rights'; right's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40840840841 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38687886201 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8092892097 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.727272727 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267536328426 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991948208147 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089426904436 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16959773287 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425186291637 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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